Pour mon cheri frere…   5 comments

bro n sis

He was standing bent down

Near the bench where she sat crying,

Looking up at the boy with his Nike backpack

A nerdy one with spiked hair

Reaching out he tucked a lame strand of her hair

Off her face with lotsa care… 

———-

My mind flew to all the times

You’d do that to me;

How many people entered and exited Like planes streaking across the sky,

Made silent cuts not heard to those distant,

But made me cry nonetheless…

And always, like soft puffs of cloud

You would gather around me and fill them shut.

———

When my heart was left shattered onto the mirror,

You laid me in your lap… and spent nights…

Pushing shadows of grief out of my eyes…  ———

If your love is anything to go by,

Tonight you are my shining star…

And as I miss your arms around me, Miss all the fun you make of me,

Miss hearing you call me didi

Miss discussing philosophy,

Miss how adored and spoilt you make me feel…

Miss lying on the bed talking till 3…

I plant a long-distance good night kissy

On your eyelashiiz my dear licky

As I run outta rhymes,

For you, I can simply never pen any last lines…

For you sweet babey…

Makdeeeeeeee…!!! J

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Posted April 22, 2007 by Deepti G Gujar in nouvelles poèmes

5 responses to “Pour mon cheri frere…

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  1. I mistook it to be another of those posts (pardon my arrogance) but until I read “didi” , I stopped reading further and re-read from the start, visualizing the picture that u’ve created..the love shared between a brother and his sister.

    This post has been long due.. and I hope to read more of such posts in the future..

    take care and keep smiling..
    fAngs

  2. boy u sure kno how to make me cry huh?…
    not cried dis way or missed u dis much since u left…

    I miss…

    i miss all da late night talks we had; all da confessions we made…

    all da silly jokes we cracked n all da cussings in momentary hate…

    da movies we saw…n wen together we prayed…

    i cried my heart out after good bye to u i bade…

    with swollen “eyses” as i was in the bus which towards home made its way…

    wondered as outside da window i gazed…

    wat wud i do widout my didi for so many days?

    n now im here…

    da screen is blurred n da keyboard keys are hazed…

    i cry as i remember…

    all da good times…wen in bed together; hand-in-hand we laid….

    Just something dat came out at the moment…
    May not be gr8…but its all i can do right now…tc…i’ll never forget u pluto…

    l2 @ J a.k.a 5 l\l i ( l
  3. u write so well my dearest mickey…its unbelievable that u dont write often enough… i miss u beyond all the words and poems and music and songs my dear… just as u… close ur eyes…u’ll see me..just as i see u always…dont ever cry, cos u know i cant bear to see u cry…ever…lv u baby…we’re 2gether 4evr…remember we are Soulmates?!

  4. oye yaar,
    I miss my sister now!

    Hey Mickey, u write really well.. doesn’t surprise me though..
    why don’t u start a blog of yr own? it’l always be a nice read..

    keep smiling n writing

  5. i’ll start a blog when im mature (read free) enough…lol…ryt now not much to write abt other than how sleepy im feelin….ZZZZZZ…

    |2 @ J a.k.a S |\| i ( Y

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